Elizabeth - I had a look at your two older listings, and the listing/text itself is perfectly fine.
From what I could see, it's just the photos that need improving. And TBH a template doesn't change anything at your pictures. I wouldn't bother getting into templates or Auctive if it is in fact the pictures that are the problem. Try to improve the pictures, get them into the right format (square) so they're not stretching in a funny way and please post more of them, not just 2. I found that it's pretty crucial to offer close-ups of my beads.
If you have a look at some of the highest selling Ebay sellers ... many of them don't use a template. They upload lots of pictures with the usual Ebay uploader (were you uploaded your two pictures) and write a text just as you did.
Just my 2 cents